I really don't like the mirror, I had alot of trouble with it, and it still turned out badly. I know lots of stuff is way off in this, probably more than I can name.
This picture confuses me. I know it's supposed to look better, but I...just have no clue.
The driving force behind this is how so many girls have created a world for themselves in which everyone is prettier than them. The mirror represents self image, and how she'll never be beautiful to herself. The pictures represent reality, where she really is beautiful physically and could be beautiful in her mind if she would wake up, but it seems like it's just a pretty picture on the wall, distant, unreal, unreachable. She's clouded up her mind with falsehood and, although she denies it desperately, self pity. The umbrella over her body represents how she is trying to take cover from the rain of sorrow, but the (very terribly done to the point of being unrecognizable) tears falling from her face show how she is the one bringing the sopping wet pain upon herself. Along with this, God is the one who she is blaming for everything that is happening to her. If only she could see... Now, try replacing the 'sh' on 'she' with a w. If you feel strong enough to do it, replace the entire word 'she' with the expression 'I'.
Constructive critism please!
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Forgo-chan! This is amazing!!! The meaning behind it is very deep. I like that.
I thought the mirror looks great. I like how you made it a little blurry. One thing that would make the picture look more realistic is the tone color of the girl. The room is dark and seems like it's night time, so maybe you can make her mix with a bit of blue light? Hmmm not sure how to say it. But I hope you know what I mean
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MOVED TO ~ephemeryl
Good cutting lines, everything fits together awesomely, and it has a great message. Way to go!
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Everyone, everyday
Living just can break their hearts
S o F r a g i l e
#Animalville
#thephotographyunion
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I thought the mirror looks great. I like how you made it a little blurry. One thing that would make the picture look more realistic is the tone color of the girl. The room is dark and seems like it's night time, so maybe you can make her mix with a bit of blue light? Hmmm not sure how to say it. But I hope you know what I mean
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Thank you! I worked really hard on it in hope that nothing in the image would take away from the message!
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